You See Action
Learning Objectives
- Participants will learn to identify and convey the actions of characters in stories in ways that create the identity of characters in relation to who they are and where they are from.
The difference between stories that stay with us and stories we forget lies in how we see the actions that tell those stories. Writers must be able to observe their environment and appreciate what it offers them; they must shy away from the urge to show an action in the same way every other person would. If you see action like every other person, then why should a reader spend time on your story?
You See Action
Tutor: Nabeelah Usman
Knowledge has been passed already and I’m happy to be a participant.
The power of observation. Though the use of adverbs is always tempting to use but now I know better. Use the words to describe the situation better. This is awesome. Thanks Nabeelah
I feel this is one of the most informative courses I’ve come across because it explains why it’s important to be an observant reader, and also considering aspects like action, dialogue, character development, story structure and weaving all of these in a believable way for a reader to have interest in your work, it’s important to remember through your creativity how important the readers/audience is.
This comment truly, truly makes us happy. Thank you, Risa.
You’re welcome.
Thank you so much for these courses. They’ve challenged my entire thought process when coming up with story. T
We are very pleased with this feedback.
Thank you so much for these courses. They’ve challenged my entire thought process when coming up with a story. It has been informative . I cannot wait to use what I have learnt in my subsequent stories.
To avoid -ly and similes, i should depict contentment.
😀 These are considered a form of “cheating” the reader. . . of a full reading experience.
The lesson has been quite enlightening. Thank you for the insights
Thanks for helping us think about the intricacies of the English language, its been quite a while! Now the ball is in our court. Asante sana to the organizers, our trainers and all the best to the writers.
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Writing with style!
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I find this very insightful and it’s shaping me in ways I couldn’t fathom and I’m glad I’m not going to be a lazy writer from now on 😇
Here’s to greatness and action, dear Ms. Ateino Oteino.
the small language command matters alot in writing.Thanks alot ,the whle team,this was truly educative.Personally i think am a better writer already.
This brings a lot of joy to our hearts! Now we look forward to getting your stories.
The course has been too informative. Many lessons taken home. Starting from writer -audience relation to the complexity within the simple language command.
Here’s to not being a lazy adverbial writer.
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Thank you.
Thanks once again and good luck Ma’am 👍
Every word should count. Thank you!
So much to internalize! Thank you so much Nabeelah and the Engaging Borders Africa team!
We are delighted, dear Fanidh. We look forward to getting your stories. We will be in touch in the coming hours and days.